Lisa - Cool characters! My one concern at this point, is still the originality of all this. It still feels too much like the play, just in comic form. I think you could adapt the characters and the plot a bit more to connect to a younger audience. If you want to talk more about this, let me know!
Lisa - Cool characters! My one concern at this point, is still the originality of all this. It still feels too much like the play, just in comic form. I think you could adapt the characters and the plot a bit more to connect to a younger audience. If you want to talk more about this, let me know!
ReplyDeleteyeah i get it, and i agree. thank you for the feedback mr. Topf
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